In the early 70’s I was working at a men’s wear store in Barrie, Ontario. Some days there was hardly any sales traffic, which made the time pass very slowly. To relieve the boredom, I wrote the following little ditty.
Monastic Meter
Time
Passes
So Slowly
That souls
Become holy
By dipping their fingers in wine.
But
Somehow
The
Silence
Sets up
A defiance
So that my own thoughts are not mine.
And
Then the
Controls
Go
When singing
The soul’s woe
For all of the feelings aren’t fine.
But
What does
It
Matter
If former’s
Not latter
As long as we’re able to dine?
Over time, I realized that my poetry had an organizing theme: time. So when I went to bring all the poems into one volume, I gave the manuscript the same title as the following poem.
Time Defined
Seconds fly
Minutes skip by
Hours die
And days slip by without a rest.
Crowds hurry
Leaves scurry
Snows flurry
People worry about tomorrow’s test.
No one walks
No one talks
Watching clocks
As a fox would worry for his life.
Cooking’s timed
Speeding’s fined
Cheques are signed
Debts combine to increase the daily strife.
Noisy beats
Busy streets
Tired feet
Schedules to meet constitute what’s known as a pace.
Peacocks with hats
Night-life bats
Sleeping cats
Are all rats that run day after day in the same race.

I hadn’t realized that “Monastic Meter” is similar to the opening song in the opera “Faust”.
“Red or white liquor,
Coarse or fine!
What can it matter,
So we have wine?”
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